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Whitney : Hey~I thought I would tell you that I have a new poem if you want to read it.
Anonymous: No sad poem?
Whitney: Thanks I really thought you would like it. I got some more that I'll try to post. Later.
Whitney: Hey! I have a couple of new things for you to read. Just stop by my site and check it out.
Anonymous: Why do we write if we are told how to do it? And why do we speak if were not heard. Why try if were set up to fail.
Whitney: Good because I know that whatever you write will turn out good. You have talent and you should have faith in what you do. Just try and then tell me what you think.
Whitney: Hey are you going to write a sad poem? I would really like to read one that you write.
Nephew: I have a new post if you want to read it
Whitney: Thanks i think we just like both our poems and i think we should both keep writing and you need to write a sad poem like me and try it out and see how good you are there to.
Nephew: LOL aight my bad there ya go .....by the way.... your it
Amber: I can't believe you have your cat story done. What an overachiever! J/K You are an excellent writer, so keep it up!
Maryanna: *gives you a biiig hug* there now you've bin taged by me ^^ by the way your poems are really awsome to keep it up!
RAINBOW: PIZZA!!
Whitney: You do a really good job and i like you poem. So keep writing.
cybermagic: welcome to the Journal community!
Anne: Hello and welcome

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Monday, September 26th 2005

10:52 AM

Cinquain

  • Mood:






Pretty
Rays of sunlight
Sparkle bright
Big flashlight for our planet earth
Sunbeams



1 replies.

Posted by Robert Gray:

This poem has a light mood to it, an interesting view point on the sun, and a nice way to think of things. A good relaxing poem.
Wednesday, September 28th 2005 @ 11:06 AM

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